I agree with panda, teg and dead it needs some beat. It flows really smooth and is amazing. Keep up the good work. :D
It is recognizable but instead of making the "words" such a low tone making them higher would make them stand out a little better. This is a really good job. :D
Thanks for the review but if it was a really good job then why did I only get a 5/10
I'll try making them more high pitched next time.
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